[Possible areas of critiques:]
1. Voice - does it sound like Sora? Can you hear his voice when I play? How can I make him sound more accurate?
2. Characterization - Does he act like Sora? Has he done anything unusual that doesn't seem Sora-like? What do you feel was the more 'IC action or thought'? Why? Examples and discussion are incredibly encouraged - even in anon.
3. Motivations - Do I have his priorities straight? What should be important to him that I'm not covering?
4. Canon - Have I gotten some game facts wrong? Is Sora strong enough? Am I making him TOO strong? Is there an interpretation or headcanon of Sora you think is out of place? In what way would it be more appropriate to Sora's character.
5. Technical - How's my grammar? 
6. Storytelling - Do I make things interesting for you as an RPer? Do I put enough thought into posts? How are the plots Sora is involved in? How can I make them more interesting for you?  How can I make your character feel important when we play? How can I help your character play out his or her plots? How can I help your character have their time in the spotlight? Am I giving you enough to respond to with each post? Have I ever made a post that just 'turned you off'? Why?
7. Player Etiquette - Am I breaking any rules? Making inappropriate comments? Am I making you feel welcome? Am I easy or hard to plot and or work with? Am I easy to approach? Am I god-moding?  Are you having a positive experience overall? Am I tagging enough outside of my fandom?
 

The KH Wiki describes them as thus: 

"The Unversed (アンヴァース Anvāsu?)[1], meaning "those who were not well-versed in their own existences", are the main enemies of Kingdom Hearts Birth by Sleep and Kingdom Hearts Birth by Sleep Final Mix. They are considered "the opposite of human life", and grow from the negative emotions produced when Vanitas was created from Ventus. It is because of this that Vanitas is able to control them. By all accounts, the Unversed are extensions of Vanitas himself."
 

Each Unversed corresponds with a negative emotion, and every time Sora has experiences it in excess, an Unversed comes into existence. The most frequent ones that the Titans will be encountering are these:
 

Frustration - Wild Bruiser

Confusion - Triple Wrecker

Worry/Panic - Vial Philes

Rage/Anger - Mandrakes

Loneliness - Hareraiser

Grief - Archraven

Loneliness/Anxiety - Scrappers

Hungry/Neutral - Prize Pod (This one is generally harmless, and effective if any of the TT are craving sweets)

While they may respond to Sora and his commands in his presence, when he's not around, they will revert back to their original natures: aggressive and prone to violence, pilfering items or being a general nuisance. 

Unfortunately, Sora will be unable to go out with the team at this time to help get rid of the creatures. He'll be spending time at the TT Headquarters secluded from the others, but available on the communicators (and to RR or those who remain at the warehouse) for questions or directions on where more Unversed might be located. He won't be physically speaking or being physically present with anyone but Red Robin. 

Note: ICly, Sora will be briefing only on what Unversed are out there and how they may fight, but not precisely what they are or where they come from.  Sora will be advising the team to stay away as far away as possible from anyone who looks like him in costume (or out of costume for the few who know his identity)... and not to get old people angry.

"Sora here! Drop me a line and I'll get back to you!"

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